In my essay we did in lesson a few days ago I was disappointed with my result. I was awarded half the marks for each A0 however it was evident where I went wrong. My main targets to improve are to embed more language levels into each paragraph and strengthen my argument and judgement.
I was weakest in A01 and even though I need to incorporate more language levels, I also need to communicate in a more advanced way to the examiner as to how these prove the hypothesis. I should be able to feel more comfortable maintaining a balance between my primary and secondary research and I also need to provide challenges for pending theories. This will help me get a much better mark.
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